The reason why I have no fine girl?
Pearls stringed and diamond mounted rings,
Kings can only unbroken give, bah!
The game much too much for time.
Mine I'd leap to give gladly,
'cept sadly she watches for another
Lover who passes her by.
My thoughts only dwell on one.
Suns have sunk and set on to many 'a wests,
Testing my patience again yet again.
When will she come to crimson road?
Hold or release remembrance's grip
Trip me then into knowing seasons
Reason with me to knowing why
Sky yet holds me those winging doves
Love... you say, must wait
A lovely piece: the form has brought out some great wordplay, and a thought provoking piece.
ReplyDeleteYeah cheesewolf. This was an interesting challenge indeed. This was the first time I heard of chain rhyme.
Deletedoves and love ..the pearls and girls..wow..nice!
ReplyDeletehahaha. thanks.
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ReplyDeleteThanks. :) Yes it is indeed fun and it brings up such a different way of writing from me because of the unusual rhyme form.
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